We showed the song we found to our class peers to get some audience feedback. They all thought it was a great song and gave us ideas for our music video. They told us that the song reminded them of Chris Browns song 'With you'. They told us to make the music video really cheesy but after looking through music videos if the RnB genre we found that songs that were based on the concept of love were very abstract and didn't have a narrative in it. It just played on the concept of love and showed couples and the emotion and feeling of the artists through there daily life.
ESTABLISHING SHOTS OF ICE CUBE, SYMBOLS OF LOVE, THE ARTIST, AND EXTRAS
[Intro:]
(Yeah)
(Oh... whoa)
(Oh whoa)
(Oh whoa ho...)
(Mmm...)
(Ooh...)
(Yeah)
INTRODUCES ARTIST
[Verse 1:]
Never been the type of woman that needed someone
Had to do things myself or they never got done
Never knew around the corner I'd meet someone
That I would be totally comfortable sharin' my love
[B-Section:]
Now I don't mind lettin' my guard down
My heart is yours now
'Cause baby now
LOCATION CHANGE SLIGHT DANCE INRODUCED
[Chorus:]
You make me melt
Like an iceberg on the sea
Baby you're doin' things to me that I never felt
You make me melt
Never ever been this weak
This is all brand new to me
I think I should tell you that
You make me melt
You make me melt, (oh...), baby
GIRL IS INTRODUCED
[Verse 2:]
Now you should never say never
Look what's happenin' to me
'Cause I said I'll never let a man take the lead
But now I'm dependent
Baby you're all I need
Wouldn't last a day or an hour without you next to me
[B-Section:]
Now I don't mind lettin' my guard down
My heart is yours now
'Cause baby now
COSTUME CHANGE
[Chorus:]
You make me melt
Like an iceberg on the sea
Baby you're doin' things to me that I never felt
You make me melt
Never ever been this weak
This is all brand new to me
I think I should tell you that
You make me melt
You make me melt baby
SELLS THE ARTIST
[Ad-libs:]
Whoa oh whoa
[Bridge:]
Now I've always been the cool, independent type
(Yeah)
But now I'm different when I look in your eyes
And I try to play it as cool as ice
But you make me melt every time
[Chorus:]
You make me melt
Like an iceberg on the sea
Baby you're doin' things to me oh that I never felt
(Never felt)
You make me melt
(Oh)
Never ever been this weak
(No)
This is all brand new to me
(To me)
I think I should tell you that
You make me melt
(You make me melt, yeah, yeah)
You make me melt, (you make me melt), baby
GIRL'S FACE IS FINALLY REVEALED, VIDEO CLOSES WITH A COUPLE SHOT
AND POOL OF WATER
[Adlibs:]
{Whoa oh whoa ho... whoa}
(Like an iceberg on a sea ho whoa)
{You make me melt}
(You make me melt)
{Baby}
(Melt)
{Whoa oh whoa oh whoa}
{You make me melt}
(You make me melt)
{Baby}
{You make me melt}
[Outro:]
(That's what you do baby)
(And I lose my cool baby)
{Oh}
(When I'm with you baby)
{Baby}
(Oh melt)
(You make me melt)
(Ay)
(Melt)
(Babe)
(Melt)
(Melt)
(You make me melt
From this collage we will take idea for our digipak and magazine cover. We will use the style of writing so that the audience know the genre and use voyeurism just like all the pictures do. As you can see non of the artists are smiling so we will also be taking that idea and have our artist have serious face rather then smiling.
